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"I love you, daddy…" she whispered to me as she fell asleep within her bed. I slowly closed the door to her room and stood there. I just stared at the wooden door. It was only a few minutes but it felt like years. "…why?" whispered as I look down at my hooves. Nopony could see it but it was there…blood. Blood of those I killed when I was blinded with rage and nothingness…how can somepony love me?
I walk away from my daughter's door and headed down stairs and found my wife sleeping on the couch. She look so beautiful laying there…her snow white coat shine as the glow of the TV set covered her. Her soft blue and purple mane was covering close eyes, so I wasn't sure if she woke from my touch as I stroke her back. "…Netrunner…" I softy said as I stop stroking her. "…I'm sorry for breaking my promise, which we made years ago but…" that was all I said as I walk over to the computer and opened a word document. Tears filled my eyes as I headed for the door. Before I left, I look around as I heard something from Net. "…don't leave me Ray…or I'll…" I waited a few seconds before she spoke again, which in turn made me smile "…beat the living buck out of you…"
I closed the door and a part of me headed off to the void. The void of the darkness where I belong…while the other part of me will always stay within the ponies I loved and care for…I will always live on within in their hearts…
The doc that I left open will tell my past and the pony's hearts I affected. Good or bad: "Chains of Heart"

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eeyup, here a story and it's going to be my oc background(finally @_@).

Netrunner belongs to :iconmrsstarsparkle:

yes yes. bad grammar and what not >_>

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~Zerog41612 Mar 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
wow for an introduccion i quite amazing!
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~mlpMaconMixx Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Is there more to this story? Where is Ray going? What, exactly, was the promise to Netrunner? Gosh, I realize this was a long time ago, but I'm just now seeing it.

My review: NEEDS MORE PONIES! Seriously, though, you have me interested. Now you just need to write more. :3
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~JimRaynorHyperion Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
there more. check the galley or here [link]
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~mlpMaconMixx Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I just finished reading it. Great story! I left a few comments on it over there. Thanks for sharing it. :D
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Mood: Love ~VixyHooves Oct 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Id beat the buck outta you for sure :I <3 and as soon as i either get my new pc or the tablet running on this one... i wanna draw a pic to this if you dont mind~
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Mood: Joy ~JimRaynorHyperion Oct 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
sure. you don't need to ask me silly ^^
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~VixyHooves Oct 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*gets the chains and rope just incase* welp time for work ,_, .. just came to check before running~ *huggles and kisses XD *
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Mood: Neutral ~JimRaynorHyperion Oct 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
*sighs* ...how long do i have to stay tie up here? @_@

ps: is skype working for ya on the dino?
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~VixyHooves Oct 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
just got it working but you knew that~

and you have to stay tied up till you realize you can never leave us, or your daughter will become a dark vengefull pony bent on finding her father and dragging him back, because her mother died of heartbreak :p
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Mood: Neutral ~JimRaynorHyperion Oct 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i did?

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